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Andy and Cooper are back!
Hi Andy.
Thanks so much for the comments. Will think about 'riding the wave' and get back to you on that one. Thanks to Cooper as always. How the years have flown. It's been great working with you both. I am lucky to have such a great team of CRs. It's all about trust and honesty. Give Cooper a hug from me. Suzanne 
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Ben hits the Bull's Eye.
Excellent substitute text Ben. I love it! "its range of features are as rich as those on a luxury car, with performance to match. In the field of coffee machines, this was indeed the Mercedes Benz...” Your suggestion is spot on. I've used your text, only you have to promise me you're not going to claim co-authorship of the work. Thanks so much my friend. Cheers, Suzanne 
A huge thanks to all the critical readers. YOU'RE THE BEST! I'm so fortunate to have you all on the team.
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What the Reviewers think of THE ART DEALER
Sharon's first critical analysis is also in.
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Sharon found most of the typos and missing words. She even checked the punctuation. Great piece of editing. Thanks Sharon. Tomorrow I'll post your suggestions about how I could improve the sentence structure in a few places. Thank you for all the time you spent on the manuscript and for going over it with a fine tooth comb. Back soon! Suzanne Penny's final verdict.
Penny's comments are excellent.
They demonstrate how important good CRs are. Thank you Penny. I'll incorporate your ideas in the rewrites. As you know, sophisticated readers pick up small inconsistencies. The Devil is always in the detail. To make the novel more authentic I will transform the Nokia into a Blackberry or iPhone. Now why didn’t I think of that? When the publisher sends me a contract you can start planning the celebrations. Cheers, Suzanne 
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